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Lupatrian's avatar

This is so good! I was riveted. Wow. Brilliant and engaging. I *really* loved it. How do ideas like this come to you? I love that it's an entire story encapsulated in short form. Word sculpture.

Missi's avatar

incredibly real read 🍸

James Armstead's avatar

This is some proper old school science fiction, like the type I used to read as a kid that was written decades before I was born. What a journey!

John Smiley Garrett's avatar

This is, without any doubt, the best short story I've read in decades.

And I read a LOT!

Thanks for this, Tom. Are you planning on trying to get it formally published?

Tom Wellborn's avatar

Thank you. No, no plans.